Week 8 Comments and Feedback

I have been receiving an abundance of feedback due to the fantastic way Professor Gibbs has structured the course. I am happy with the feedback I am receiving and I am expecting even more feedback from students as the week progresses. I try to leave good feedback comments. I do not want to sound harsh or critical especially since I am typing, so students can perceive text one way when I could have meant it a different way. I have not tried out the "Let's Pretend" feedback option much, but I might start soon. That is a really creative one to me and it would be a great way to provide feedback without the feedback seeming like it is coming from the reader.

I feel like I am getting to know people through their blogs. I already know a few people in this class from other classes, but it is great meeting new people on here. Also, by posting on a blog there is no direct contact, so it is easier to post about various topics. A way to make sure feedback is better would be to progress through the writers stories. Observe if they are making the same mistakes or if their writing is improving.
                                                                           
 This one is my favorite feedback picture. Many times people mistake failing for being a failure but that is not true. Failing means to grow, and to grow is to succeed. Source: Blogspot

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